Creature Poem by Tom Allport

Creature

Rating: 4.6


Innocent creature
Desperate to cry
Feathered friend lying there
Eyes, opened to the sky
Beak, struggling to open
Just... waiting to die.

Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Garry Rowlands 04 April 2017

Very dsrk ending to a poem about hopes and dreams? Very good.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 20 November 2016

The poet's feeling expressed on the dying pangs of a petty creature is remarkable 10

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