Friday, November 15, 2013

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It is a cold world,
All this pain,
All this rage,
Do you know its my homage?
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Lucifera Santez
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Md Asadullah 18 January 2014

Nicely penned, touched the heart.

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Calvin Curdle 28 November 2013

Wonderful! Go santez!

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Charles Monroe 26 November 2013

In Lucifera's mirror I see myself a creature That crept from desks gratified And tried to be the teacher But soon became the student And them became a dream And then a stupid nightmare Where walls are velveteen. O Lucifera's mirror A kiss for your reflection Or worthy of remembrance In all the world's perception. Are we but eve-less dawns Or English theme-less songs My weakness, seems less strong As I accept my wrongs And me, I see more clearer In Lucifera's mirror. P.X 11_26_13_ 2: 35AM

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Lyn Paul 15 November 2013

I do not believe it is a cold world yet oh there are some COLD and callous humans out there. But life is about survival and can we survive it? Thank you Lucifera

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