Thursday, January 22, 2009

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Focus stranded on the island her face forms
a magnetic pull eliminating each thought that crawls through my one tracked mind
she's unable to find this thought so devine
both feeling the desparation held back from our unbreechable walls
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Evaughn Gray 02 February 2009

it's very sweet, i love the rhym sceme.. it's a wonderful poem, i loved it.~Hazel G.E

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