Creator&Creature Comments

You are one of the best creation of the great creator. i adore your emotion.

I agree with all comments below, but then what i am going to comment? oh yes one thing..it has an original and very Mirna style! ..._Soul

so impressive and touching.the ending is really marvelous.the remained silhouette on the sand and kiss as the creator. love it 10++~nb

An admirable poem which touches the soul 1

Great to see you posting Mirna, and good write :)