Friday, January 18, 2008

Creative Shame Comments

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Neglecting the presence of choiceless
pain, I became singular and I said
I would not allow the life
slip through my fingers.
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Goldy Locks 18 January 2008

your delibate display of decadent verse, thickly layered, as a testament/tribute to your creativity, is not done out of shame; nor does it lend credence to ill repute - but rather exemplifies an honorable intuition and further validates that your moral standings are something to be revered. have missed reading! xxsjg ps- Is it your intention to throw us off with stoic indiscretion? Because it's not working ;)

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