Saturday, March 3, 2007

Creative Purgatory Afore The Advent Comments

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Trapped in a creative purgatory, I strive to survive
As one magnificent manufacture is constructed
The others escape fertilization
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Oni Hayes
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Stug Jordan 19 March 2007

Second stanza stands out, being the only one with some clever, physical imagery. As for the subject, I know how you feel. More imagery, scattered randomly or unexpectedly, would suit your style very well.

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Oni Hayes

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Long Island, New York
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