Thursday, November 28, 2019

Creative Liars Comments

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She saved my line with "Mugu"
And you said it means "Darling"
You never have data
Yet, you are always
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Raimi Babatunde
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Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

meaning of " Mugu" : in Nigeria: 'big foot'; 'in the West it is mainly known in the context of Advance fee fraud' (whatever that is!) stanza 3: mummified? check spelling you sound somewhat embittered! ! ! poor fellow. i enjoyed this poem. stanza 1: " data" what kind of data? or MAYBE you meant " date" ? ? 'a date', as in a get together with a possible 'romantic connection'? to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

1 - Are " entrepreneurial strategists" creative liars? ? ? ? ? now to read your poem. [wow. Kingsley's comment would not make feminists happy, ...or would it? They WANT to be 'men', don't they? ha ha] line 1: what does " line" mean here? or do you mean " life" ? line 4: " always" what? i like when poets throw in some (correct) punctuation. stanza 2: Cold Stone Creameries in CA & OR, USA? not TOO far from me; i'll go get some!

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Kingsley Egbukole 29 November 2019

Ladies and lies are inseparable, however most of their lies are cheap and easy to puncture.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 November 2019

A nice poem that makes interesting reading. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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