Sunday, July 24, 2016

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Streaks of pink and white
On a little flower; tender and light.
Rows of brown and green
On a tiny leaf are seen.
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Fathima Usman
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Gajanan Mishra 24 July 2016

good one, what the creation would be.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 July 2016

For this has been the way! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 July 2016

It was a long talk between us about the person going to absorb most of the ensuing days in 2015, who was very soon going to be discovered and that I will have to lose the job which gave me an access to that girl, the new friend. I think now you can guess her. It is the Supreme Lord's creation, one can never predict. Nice poem dear poet. Thanks for the sharing. 10 for the poem. Subhas ସୁଭାଷ ଚନ୍ଦ୍ର ଚକ୍ର

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