Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Creation Of Serenity Comments

Rating: 4.4

Magnificent in stature
Body of brilliant design
Eyes, orbs of innocence
Devoured in emerald shine
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Wendy Bureau
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Kesav Easwaran 24 April 2009

nice poem in adoration of Luna...your words here are as beautiful as the goddess you adore, Wendy...thanks...10

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Chitra - 16 August 2008

another gem of a write! fine lines these are

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Bob Blackwell 13 August 2008

A serene poem, I enjoyed the read. At one time I had flowing auburn hair, now its flowing white - true serenity cannot change. Bob

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Andrew Blakemore 13 August 2008

This is pure poetry Wendy, a wonderful classically written piece straight from the heart. Best wishes, Andrew

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Ron Flowers 12 August 2008

That was beautifully done, Wendy. You get a 10 from me. Ron

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