Monday, April 7, 2008

Creation (For Lyn) Comments

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First he carved
the water

whittled it
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 07 April 2008

When I first read this, I thought you were talking about God...but then I remembered there are some adults who SEEM like gods to us as children, and I am reminded that this is one of the things you do best...remembering, with your child-like innocence what it WAS LIKE to be that child, and then writing it down. Every one of these that you write seems so real to me that I could shut my eyes and be a child again too. It is ONE of the things I love about your writing. Scarlett (LYN)

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