Friday, October 11, 2013

Creation Comments

Rating: ★5.0

What I have created is so Beautiful
What more could I ask
What more is there in this world
Other than...
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Lyn Paul
beautiful greed
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Bill Cantrell 18 February 2018

Yes indeed, greed is the ruination of things that are beatiful, lovely poem

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Tom Allport 08 May 2017

an insightful poem of one of creations possible downfalls? ...........well written

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Adeline Foster 06 December 2013

Nicely done. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Amitava Sur 20 October 2013

well thought write up. Life can't move without creation.

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Dave Walker 12 October 2013

A great poem, if we could skip the greed, what a world it would be.

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David Wood 12 October 2013

The cycles of life is beauty to behold. Lovely poem Lyn.

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Danny Draper 12 October 2013

The cycles of life are precious and their continuity should be respected. Great thoughts.

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