Friday, October 28, 2011

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Shades of cerulean blue are outstanding in the very early morning’s sky-
Darkness is fading as the sun awakens-
The moon was full last night, though still peering through the trees-
Reddish-orange foliage almost glowing as would a bonfire,
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Adeline Foster 04 January 2012

Well written. You need not apologize for your work. You pay attention to punctuation and your expression is grammatically feasible. If the content is an expression of the turmoil in your heart (so be it!) that is what poetry is all about. Read mine – We the Unencumbered – Adeline

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Claudia Krizay

Claudia Krizay

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