Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Creation Comments

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First day God created the day and night.
he thought it would be good to have darkness and light.
Second day He created the heavens and earth.
That's how water and sky came to birth.
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Anna Petrashishina
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Good poem, nice rhyme scheme.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 July 2012

WOW! It's so nice. ya, the God is unique and powerful! nice piece! keep writing.

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CB Carlos 22 September 2011

Our God is the best! Nicely written. Keep them coming up! :)

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