Sunday, May 4, 2008

Creating Nothings Comments

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As many people know
I don't often drink.
Only a coke
Trying not to provoke
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Irene C S ClarkHogg
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Philip Housiaux 12 May 2008

Enjoyed your light fun topic. The trochee and the trimetre really gave it a fun and punch. very good work

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~ Jon London ~ 04 May 2008

Great poem...well composed and delivered...hope your head wasn't too bad the following morning........but after 15 black russians..hard not to have the builders in banging about. Best wishes Jon

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