Create The You Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Create The You

Rating: 5.0


my validation of love
is to give and please all
and seek pleasure through it

my security in life
is to receive the treasure
of sharing and caring

my love is to love
without the fear of pain
and desire, greed and jealousy

my life is given by god
to thank both who tested my nerves
also who groomed me to create the me! ! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
thank both the enemy and well wisher.to create the you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love which is the basis of all the things done.Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 May 2016

The treasure of sharing and caring! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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I extend the gratitude, thanks

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 May 2016

A meaningful soliloquy versified with rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

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Welcome, dear friend thanks for the kind review

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