Thursday, July 6, 2006

Create Me A World Comments

Rating: 4.8

Create me a world with words my dear,
with pen and hand.
Where we can read love on river bed so clear,
written in sand.
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Ben Partenay
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Jennifer Marie 27 June 2008

i will always love this one :)

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Sandra Fowler 20 November 2006

How true it is that moods and feelings have the power to create their own worlds. Beautiful work, Ben. Warm regards, Sandra

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Prasanna Kumari 19 November 2006

you made the flow of love beautiful with the flow of your words...

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Ernestine Northover 07 July 2006

This is delightful Ben, it flows like the river, gently and caressingly. Precious words, floating in the water, floating away, never to be seen again. How sad. Love Ernestine XXX

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