Friday, December 14, 2007

Creases Of His Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hidden in the creases of his mind
are words, each word a key,
key to a dusty trunk
of treasures, some long ignored
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Linda Hepner
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Raynette Eitel 15 December 2007

Linda, this is crafted so well. What a metaphor...and how splendidly you gave it to us. The ending line of each stanza pairs up beautifully. I love this. Raynette

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Lamont Palmer 14 December 2007

Mmmmmm yummy. Enjoyed it. - LP

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Linda Hepner

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