Creak Comments

As small and meaningless something may seem, it always has a deeper meaning to someone. Great work.

A nice poem Ivan, simple and cute but I think Creak is not the appropriate word for a child's sound, it carries awful meaning as well. There must be some other appropriate word for this.In Urdu we call it '' Ghun Ghun '. Anyway, it's poetry and a poet's excellence is to use words in his own way. Thanks for your message. Regards.

This is so cute! Very touching. God Bless, gave you a ten! Linda

how simply adorable...such sweet simplicity and what a sweet topic.

I'm writing about myself, actually. But I aim to connect readers with my experiences. Thank you for the kind comments!

wonderful ivan! ! Keep more of them coming and plz do give me a feed back on mine as well. rdgs

lol, this is so cute...do you have a son?

Mommy's working, duh.