Crazy Writers Comments

I know exactly what is meant here as to both purpose and meaning. This is why I find fault in the first verse as a lead in. I would just remove most of it completely. Poetry is all about the economy in the use of words and lines. The more concise and limited the wording, the more powerful the message. The reason for writng this was the message. That is why it must be shortened. You must make the meaning as powerful as possible. GW62

A worthy sermon unexpected from an youngster! you seem to be different... but your words are relevant..