Sunday, January 27, 2008

Crayon Rainbows Comments

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The horizon is broken.
The sun has fallen from its seam.
The trees have risen black.
The clouds are enveloped in a violet flame.
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Indigo Rose Christman
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 February 2009

You have a great way with coming up with phrases. This is a large part of being a great poet. You have demonstrated that you have this vital tool in your kit. Even if, you don't have your crayons anymore. GW62

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YAY! you wrote it so well! I loved it! keep writing! : D

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For those of us who remember playing with our big box of crayons, drawing rainbows and little families below, this creates a visceral effective image. I enjoyed reading this. Peace, L&T

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