Friday, January 14, 2005

Crawdaddy Comments

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Watery shadows and grass ladders
at the bottom of that brook,
where the crayfish
waited. And the girls
...
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Doren Robbins
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Sue Ann Simar 07 July 2013

oh the grotesque and the delicate...I read this to my husband and he says he remembers running home from the creek up the street from his boyhood home with one hanging from his finger...latched on. He said they used to catch them from behind with their hands- take a good look at them- and then let them go. Thanks, I enjoyed sharing this poem- and like the added stanza- that brings it full circle and gives it meaning.

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Doren Robbins

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