Crashing In The Streets Comments

This is probably my favorite one of yours so far. Rated it a 10. I don't usually like to 'name drop' my own work, but you should check out my poem 'Veruca Assault'...I think it's somewhat in the same vein.

Terrific poem! I think one of your best (and that's saying something) . The rain should be a symbol for cleansing, but you turn it around on our hero. The rain is drowning him instead. This is a very good 'write' (I hate this saying) . I'm ready for more, Mr. Goerges!