Saturday, August 15, 2009

Crashing Comments

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Crashing
along the ocean shore
a sound never sounded so sweet
and along these shores of solitude
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Kathlyn Grace
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Javier Falcon 15 August 2009

Interesting only someone who has lived near the ocean can write something like this haha... I love writing about water... Florida is a great spot to use it as a theme... I like how you write... Keep on: D

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Leah Ayliffe 15 August 2009

lovely poem, flowed nicely 10!

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Kathlyn Grace

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