Crash-Test Dummies Comments

yes, life sometimes feels like an experiement...but what we we supposed to prove?

It is what you don't say that is more intrigueing than what you do say because the subtle suggestions of sequiturs that are to be assumed are so meaningful that it forces the reader (me, for example) to think outside of the box.

I know that dance between gravity and the will to fly. Every time I've danced it I have finished up flying. Odd thing that.----10

The first verse grabbed me, the second one held me still tighter and at the end, I felt as if I had witnessed an enjoyable sort of a car wreck..(smile) Great lines in here.