Wednesday, October 3, 2012

Crash Bang Comments

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Speed!
Weathered
Slippery roads
High speed
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Allemagne Roßmann 07 October 2012

1,2,3 car pile-up crash------great metaphors in those simple lines, a lot conveyed in brevity

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Harindhar Reddy 03 October 2012

Hello Poe'TESS, Marvelous display of words! I jotted many poems with words making sounds of cracking sound when our teeth break chocolate. I wonder how you emulated here. however, hope yr car journey ends safe....... With due respect......... H*** Glass shattered scattered Screams squashed fleas sounds well.

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