Saturday, October 24, 2009

Cranial Woods Comments

Rating: 5.0

Never will uphold anger or hatred
Never will sail far to the ocean
Gone the days of pity and sorrow
With the dust on my window
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Crash Of Rain
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Tai Chi Italy 24 October 2009

This is amazing work dear poet...these line near the centre, are priceless! Gone the times of elation With the termites gobbling Around the cranial woods All those rafters need is a bit of assuring up! Great write, final lines, one of my favourite passtimes...staring into the flames somehow reinstates us with our anchestors....so warm and comforting. Smiling at you Tai Smiling at you

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