Crafting My Existence Poem by Shakira Nandini

Crafting My Existence

Rating: 5.0

Speaking aloud, forging a path,
I am passing through, creating my own atmosphere.

Not even the stitching of a lifetime could cover me,
I remained bare, while crafting my own robe.

This is my spring, as I pass by,
Turning every dry tree into green.

Every branch continued to sway,
But the bird dried up while building its nest.

What more can happen, O Nandini, at the end of hardship?
I have shattered, while shaping my own mirror.

Crafting My Existence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 02 November 2024

People who care about culture are always running hither and yon, stitching the cloth scraps together, because the garment is forever fraying. The fraying of the garment of culture is our shared nakedness.

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Denis Mair 31 October 2024

Even a ragtag garment of words, when stitched with care, makes a fabric of culture that holds people's thoughts together.

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Denis Mair 31 October 2024

It is your talent to make your own atmosphere. One whose whole lifetime is a garment is able to sew expansively. But at the same time, stitching reclaim the garment of words that join our collective thoughts in purity.

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Denis Mair 31 October 2024

The garment of nakedness comes in spring green and autumnal colors. I hope your seasons change gracefully.

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