Monday, October 19, 2009

Cradled Comments

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Cradled in security
A baby is comforted
By the rocking momentum
Of a tree swayed by a breeze...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Allemagne Roßmann 29 October 2009

i THINK THIS ONE SHOULD GO TO TOP 100 LISTINGS....I FULLY ADJUDGE IT UNREASONABLY COZ' IT HAS NO NOOK TO FIND OUT A FLAW. Cradled in security A baby is comforted By the rocking momentum Of a tree swayed by a breeze... Guided by a wisp of of air A soul is put in motion In time with the momentum Of ethereal beings... Daydreaming a dimension Away from activity The restoration of life Is nurturered by direction... EXTRADORINARY DEVOTION WITH EXEMPLARY FAITH.....GREAT DELIVERY....10 W/O SAYING

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Eyan Desir 29 October 2009

You have written some excellent poems here

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rago rago 20 October 2009

And I think is really a fine write.................

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