Sunday, September 13, 2009

Cradle My Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

wait me up in the deep slumber, till the breathe
i fade and bring the honey comb in the lips at time
of my thirst, knowing that i would last for a life time,
in the shadow of today
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Antonio Liao
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 September 2009

bade farewell my dear heart, the end is not to stay for i will leave my flesh in the dust i return, and my soul forever go on, where somewhere loosen my fate and flew in the everlasting destiny i am gone A very fine poem. Reality sublimed in its highest form. Cradling your dust is to get the everlasting gold...........10/10. Regards Naseer

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