Cracks Comments

But I’ll never reach their happiness And if I did, what even would I do then? I like they way these lines sound and also the last 2 lines... I like that Idea of pain as you grow...what inspiration?

I like the idea of this poem, very original please recheck your grammar though, I believe you mistakenly used the word class instead of glass near the end of this write

nice work.. has really really great meaning...

Nice! I can picture this in my mind of a plant growing in the cracks! Very imaginative and creative streaks are growing in this! I totally can feel this. Very good job!

wow, you've got some talent, Tim. Keep writing! I loved this poem!

oh this has a lot of meaning to it, i see that your in a lot of pain in what you go through, its thought out pretty good :)