Saturday, March 24, 2007

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My soul fell into the crack you left on my heart
I thought it was a crack but I found out it was the entrance to pain
And you are the one who put it there
When you looked at me with those eyes and told me you didnt love me anymore
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Cheyenne Ashley
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 March 2008

Well, I think there is anger there as well as pain. You communicate between the lines, that's hard to do. Its critical in the modern style everyone seems to like in the art world. Its not my style, but this is quality stuff in yours. GW62

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Cheyenne Ashley

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Pennsylvania sadly
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