Cracked Poem by Sandra Feldman

Cracked

Rating: 5.0


Strange,
How you can't hold back!
And you have to write,
Like crawling out of a sac
Where you've been trapped,
Deprived of Paradise,
Until finally, you Crack!
Become a poet,
And who needs That! ! ? ?

And,
You think you've done
A great big thing,
Leaning how to fly
With half a wing...

Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: open,opinion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2018

Wow, what a brilliant write it is! I appreciate this poem and its way of presentation. Thanks for sharing.10

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Richard Wlodarski 24 November 2018

All poets need that, Sandra. That's what gives us life! Greatly philosophical with just the right touch of sarcasm. Excellent write!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2018

Dear Sandra, such a marvelous write..........10+++++++++++++

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