Monday, November 21, 2016

Crack Of Shine Comments

Rating: 4.7

The sky was dark and dreary
as I trudged along the path,
with vision dim and bleary,
under thunderclouds of wrath,
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 29 August 2017

Yes, it had a resemblance of a woman to me and I thought..this it the perfect picture to go with he poem, typo corrected, poemhunter will not let me edit, glitches, I had to delete and repost, at any rate, I'm glad you liked it.

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Harley White 29 August 2017

Well, Bill, you bowled me over with this great surprise! Too bad you couldn’t edit. I do it often. I posted my long comment again with a couple of deletions, though I don’t see it as yet. At any rate, you fixed it fast and added my name and I am cosmically grateful for your tribute!

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Bill Cantrell 28 August 2017

Wonderful poetry! inspiration is a wonderful thing, ir you would like, please read my poem..Cosmic Wonder, it's a tribute to your poetry, I wasn't sure if you would approve of me using your name in the tribute.

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Harley White 29 August 2017

To begin with, I’m glad you liked my “Crack of Shine” poem, which was born out of despair and a childhood memory. As to your “Cosmic Wonder”, I have answered your question (“First off, yes, you may use my name in your tribute.”) and made a long comment on your poem, which amazes me. It took me some time to find words to respond to your tribute, which has quite overwhelmed me. And I love the image of “Stellar Spire in the Eagle Nebula”, which you put with the poem. As I said there, “You yourself are a wonderment…” I don’t know how to thank you, Bill Cantrell!

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