Today is the day
When you came into being
For earthly sight seeing
From motherly heaven
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belated happy birthday to your niece..nebula, a star...stars that brighten the night as inspiration to lonely sky..this piece is a nice gift to your loving niece..naizz
You immortalized the love you feel for your niece in this beautiful poem. Am sure she was impressed, honored and greatful as this is such a wonderful gift. Thank you very much for sharing. :)
hi naseer phenomenal...you wrote a celestial ode...took a light speed tour of the universe and found a jewel...no mean task there great penning cheers...its a tenner
Beautifully written, I loved it. Keep up the good work and please continue to write beautiful poetry.
A fascinating description of a date in time and the birthday of one who is near and dear. From Australia, may I take this opportunity to wish Muizza the happiest of birthdays. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Happy birthday Muizza! This poem is a shrine for this great day and those that are to come!
Wat a gift for your niece...send my reagards...happy birthday 'Muizza'...wish all of your expectations will come true
What a graceful, luminous gift you have given to your niece on her birthday. I am sure she will cherish it. Time will have us all, but words are imperishable. A bouquet of good wishes to both of you. Warmest regards, Sandra
your niece sure must be a great joy to inspire you to write this lovely poem in celebration of her birtyday. Mamta
What a birthday gift, a dedication of Love and pride, and already placed tenderly into her treasure chest I am sure - a legacy you have already left to the world Naseer - this is left in her heart for all time Peace to you all