Wednesday, November 4, 2020

Crab And Capricorn Comments

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Razor-sharp the sound of your words,
lacerating with cruelty;
with jealousy, and obsession,
into the wounds of my heart
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 November 2020

Beautiful poem. The metaphors and imagery are sublime. And the story is unambigous the battle of the sexes excepting now girl power is not taking any prisoners. He broke your heart you break his ego. Fair and square and at the end there is no re match. You are both so far gone best is splitting for good. You done good.

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