Monday, March 26, 2012

Coz' I'Ve Got The Blues For You Comments

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The sky is playful with the clouds,
He won't deny the love he has.
For he isn't shy to speak his heart
To his beloved betrothed cloud.
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Besa Dede
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Patricia Grantham 01 June 2013

A love that was lost can leave a person feeling like their heart had been torn out. When it finally begins to mend you can still feel a pinch now and then. A really good write. Please read Love Seesaw when you get a chance.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 June 2012

I enjoyed this Good write.

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Danny Draper 07 June 2012

The metaphor of cloud and sky the ephemeral fleeting cloud and the permanent and reliable sky. You are the sky and some clouds are storms and then gone but the sky is blue, with the blues.

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Thy lines so dropp like the dropp of the touching dove leaving a pure inspiration. Good one. MAY I INVITE U TO READ MY POEM 'WOE' AND 'THE LONE HEART' also give me your view. Thanks

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