Things are the same,
But I'm barely sane.
For a long time now,
I've played the same old game.
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Is this an autobiographical poem? It certainly seems to be. You told me about moving from the Northwest to Atlanta (?) , but you seemed excited by the move. Is this the flip side of the coin - the stress of moving - whereas your first mention of it was the positive aspect? I know the stress of moving, and I just moved from Lilydale to Inver Grove Hts. - they're adjacent to each other! But moving can be a hassle. I hope writing the poem cleared your head. It seems to be the kind of poem that can work psychological benefits. I hope it did.
A wonderful poem, especially for one so young. Keep writing, Sana. Peace.