Thursday, November 30, 2017

Coward Comments

Rating: 4.9

Why this veil, show your face
Don't hide behind the window pane
Come face to face then you will win
Or people will say you are insane
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2022

I repeat, this poem is of different taste that laudably articulated a challenge…… Don't throw arrows from behind/What you gain to see them bleed/Don't shed blood of innocents/When the war is with someone else—Liked the high intensity of expression! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

Typo: He pretends

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

Don't say that you are a friend With your smile don't kill Do something worth for a thrill.....the expression emanates from the bottom of heart of a genuine poetess! Well done! !

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A B Faniki 14 October 2019

A thoughful poem thanks for sharing.

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Edmund Strolis 01 September 2018

Cowards come in many forms. Some weak by disposition. Others are weak by taking advantage of others through power and deception. The first may be forgiven and pitied but those in the latter must be unmasked and named for what they and their crimes are.....bravo Rini, well done!

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2018

Don't shed blood of innocents When the war is with someone else What do you gain being a coward.. problems of sincerity and hiding behind a veil in relationships.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jaya Das 14 June 2018

This is again an amazing wrie.Very precisely penned and beautifully depicted the thought...thanks for this one

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White Tiger 09 May 2018

Very straight out poem Rini. I like it very much.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 March 2018

A strangely hard message to those idiot terrorizers and hence the cowards.. intensity of your expressions painted so beautifully. A courageous heart can deliver such a humane message. Thanks Rini for this unique type of poem from you. 10++++++++++++++ Subhas

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Rini. 01 March 2018

Thanks for your encouraging words Subhas..! !

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Savita Tyagi 28 January 2018

Cowards can never find courage to come out face to face. Be aware all from their attack! Good advice Rini in a good poem.

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Rini Shibu 28 January 2018

Thanks for the visit and comment Savitaji! ! !

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Bipasha D 14 January 2018

Oh yes, I agree with you! cowards always throw arrows from behind and they never ever dare Come face to face...

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Rini Shibu 15 January 2018

Thanks Bipasha for your comment.. Rini

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Richard Wlodarski 13 January 2018

An unforgettably profound poem on cowardice and courage. Par excellence! Kudos, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 13 January 2018

Thank you so much Richard for visiting this poem

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 11 December 2017

on't throw arrows from behind so beautiful line10+++

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Rajan.

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Dark Soul 03 December 2017

Rini, my dark soul looks good in your poem shooting down errant fools.

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Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Thanks Soul for your comment

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Wayne Good 03 December 2017

Rini you are the best markswoman on this site.

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Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Thanks for your comment Wayne

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Tex Crow 03 December 2017

You are very brave to shoot these gutless birds down.

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Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Thanks Tex...

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Jenny Kismore 03 December 2017

The cowards on this site hide behind inanity.

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks Jenny kismore

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 December 2017

or people will say you are insane people r born just to say use your mind if u have ONE I say have pseudo names its okay show your face's smiles always nice vision why first letters as CAPS all? Rinny

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks poet..

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Akhtar Jawad 02 December 2017

Don't shed blood of innocents When the war is with someone else Great thoughts nicely penned poem.

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Rini Shibu 02 December 2017

Thanks Akhtar for your feedback

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 02 December 2017

Smooth flow in your style dear. Good

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Rini Shibu 02 December 2017

Thanks Abhimanyu for reading

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