Saturday, May 15, 2021

Covid-19 Love Story Series - Part 5 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fringes of the day lingered on hope's pendulum
Memory flashed something more than what lay before his eyes
As the sun crosses mysteriously behind the bamboo trees
Standing tall and thick, the virus was playing hide and seek.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 May 2021

Follow the science of the disease and it will self limit. Faith, belief and hype will finish the spears work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2021

Mask and oxygen both are important./ Every person should be careful during second and third wave. This poem is very brilliantly penned and amazing.

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Mamta S 16 May 2021

Amusing poem. This is doing love justice

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Kostas Lagos 16 May 2021

Impressive piece of work! ! !

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Varsha M 16 May 2021

The butterfly gave several attempts to reach the rose......this maintains perfect feel of separation. The pain. The desire to reunite despite all hinderance...a hopeful poem.

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Varsha M 16 May 2021

Her smile replaced the out-of-stock injections to boost the immunity....this expression speaks a lot.... beautiful.

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Varsha M 16 May 2021

The mask and the oxygen pipe played the spoiler.....spoiler generally speaks of spoiling by revealing

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Varsha M 16 May 2021

As the sun crosses mysteriously behind the bamboo trees Standing tall and thick, the virus was playing hide and seek...... that's perfectly maintaining the feel of hope

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Varsha M 16 May 2021

Sir the beginning is stupendous. Imagery begins right there. In This tough hour i can feel the fringes at fulcrum of hope....

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Birendra Bandhu 15 May 2021

Crafty poem with rich vocabulary.

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Poetic Sky 15 May 2021

My fav: Her eyes sparked the love, shooting up in his heart His bristly nose could not smell the fragrance of her skin. The lip, though was ready to bribe the kisses.

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me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

ALL YOUR POEMS ARE PLUS 100000000000000000ZZZZZZZZZ

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me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

The mask and the oxygen pipe played the spoiler Her smile replaced the out-of-stock injections to boost the immunity The butterfly gave several attempts to reach the rose Kept behind the glass cover, and the oil kept burning the lamp. BEAUTIFUL WORDS

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