Friday, June 5, 2009
Covering The Pain Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Light the candle, watch the flame
Feel the heat, sense the shame
Hide the cuts, cover despair
Dress up, then re-dye the hair
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Lady Grace
08 June 2009
even if this poem is written nicely but i sensed the sadness in every word that has been said..grace
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Catrina Heart
05 June 2009
both internal and end rhymes were great....fine diction used...Thanks! ! ! 10+++
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7/24/2025 5:51:20 PM # 1.0.0
Sadness and satire beautifully blended in this rhythmic poem. You have the talent and the capability, Margaret. Please keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer