Friday, December 30, 2016

Coursing Down My Spine Comments

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I feel the sweat
Going down my spine.
I wonder what it is
That makes me sweat.
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Mj Lemon 06 January 2017

Sarah, there is so little poetry written about the working class, that this work really stands out. It isn't just the subject matter, but the style and skill. You have empathy and admiration for the toiling woman and man. With the image of that belt going up and down you capture every anxiety and joy the working person can and will feel. A great poem. I'm adding this to my favourites.

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