Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
Tuesday, December 9, 2014

Courageous Cinderella Comments

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Once upon a time there was a daughter,
In family of merchant she was in laughter.
The time came she lost her both parents,
Thirteen brothers left one sister tenants.
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Daniel Brick 04 January 2015

Your version of Cinderella is remarkably resilient in the face of injustice. If those who persecuted her thought she would collapse, surrender, give up, they were very wrong. Not only does she prevail, but she forgives her persecutors, What strength of spirit she displays! But I'm sure she is also the happiest person alive in that extended family.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Thoughtful write with beautiful message. One should never give up even in adverse times. Beautiful presentation of Courageous Cinderella. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Lyn Paul 14 December 2014

A lovely poem and I thank you for your notes

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 December 2014

A very nicely crafted poem with a great message...............10/10

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Valsa George 11 December 2014

In adversity, one should look upon God for guidance and strength! He won't desert us! Great message!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 December 2014

Beautiful poem on courageous Cinderella Soon she surrendered before supreme God, In God's feet she poured devotion and did nod. Fear went away; obstacles broke at a moment, With courage moving in forest got goat comment. thanks for share

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 December 2014

Beautiful poem on courageous Cinderella Soon she surrendered before supreme God, In God's feet she poured devotion and did nod. Fear went away; obstacles broke at a moment, With courage moving in forest got goat comment. thanks for share

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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