Once upon a time there was a daughter,
In family of merchant she was in laughter.
The time came she lost her both parents,
Thirteen brothers left one sister tenants.
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Thoughtful write with beautiful message. One should never give up even in adverse times. Beautiful presentation of Courageous Cinderella. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
A very nicely crafted poem with a great message...............10/10
In adversity, one should look upon God for guidance and strength! He won't desert us! Great message!
Beautiful poem on courageous Cinderella Soon she surrendered before supreme God, In God's feet she poured devotion and did nod. Fear went away; obstacles broke at a moment, With courage moving in forest got goat comment. thanks for share
Beautiful poem on courageous Cinderella Soon she surrendered before supreme God, In God's feet she poured devotion and did nod. Fear went away; obstacles broke at a moment, With courage moving in forest got goat comment. thanks for share
Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
Your version of Cinderella is remarkably resilient in the face of injustice. If those who persecuted her thought she would collapse, surrender, give up, they were very wrong. Not only does she prevail, but she forgives her persecutors, What strength of spirit she displays! But I'm sure she is also the happiest person alive in that extended family.