Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Courage And Confidence Comments

Rating: 5.0

At about 0100 hours,
While I was sleeping,
My phone rang,
A naughty girl asked,
...
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 May 2022

A brilliant poem....liked it

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Khalid Saifullah 20 January 2015

Enjoyed this interesting write.....................10

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Ramesh Rai 27 August 2014

It is just like an episode. The scene is floating on the screen.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 25 August 2014

Ending is also excellent.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 25 August 2014

Its a beautiful story. You penned in such a way that it came to our mind like a movie. Nice poem I like your poems.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Beautiful and quiet interesting poem. This poem make me feel so real, as I have too faced the same prank calls long back. It really used to upset me many times. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 20 August 2014

Oh! The mischievous young boy (?) old man with clever anecdotes again! You are much sought after by naughty young girls! ...... (joking..!) What an interesting episode, so charmingly described! Enjoyed much!

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 August 2014

Even in his funny poems Akhtar Jawad gives a message.

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Tadasha Tripathy 19 August 2014

good experience sir. I liked it.

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