Thursday, January 4, 2018

Courage A Comment On Maleka Firdaus' Post Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is shy to fly but the naughty sky,
goes away and away like a mirage,
I am not but the sky is shy,
I have tried many times and failed,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Indira Renganathan 16 January 2018

Mirage and sky are both alike...mysterious...an admirable short and cute comment-poem Akhtar...thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2018

A lovely little poem! Enjoyed the poetic expression! Thanks for sharing dear sir...10

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Rini Shibu 05 January 2018

Lovely poem about the sky, beautifully presented

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 January 2018

A well crafted cleverly write. Every line is well executed.10

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