The wild wind blew left and right
It penetrated all corners
Its threatening sound like
The roaring of a jet engine.
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Like a metamorphic rock.. liked the prudent use of simile.
Your powerful depiction of courage against great odds, is touching and inspiring.5 stars.
you are not only a great writer, but a very courageous lady to pass through all odds that u come across.My gratitude to u Mam.
Courage to face the vicissitudes of life is a gift. Nice work.5 stars
This great poem, says so much about courage and life. Only the brave and pure of heart have the strength and convictions to fight against the ill winds that so strongly can discourage us and blow us down he wrong paths. Excellent piece. Truly inspiring. Encouraging and exceptional.
Our courage can be more powerful than we are aware in times of need. Take good care.
Courage is the first step leading to fruitful outcome.