Friday, March 2, 2018

Courage Comments

Rating: 5.0

It takes courage to reach
The fiery sun
And let its rays
Beat down on my soft skin
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Kesav Easwaran 16 February 2020

Success comes to those who dare. Thus goes the saying. Dreams and realities. In between there moves life- daringly. Aspirations sky high could be many. But when attempts get wet we realize our limits. The sky isn't a limit, if we could find ourselves braver enough to meet the challenges in life. Beautiful poem- though short provides a lot to ponder over.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 August 2019

It is too daring to fly/High above the waves/But I know I am braver/Than I realized...................powerful expression! An excellent poem!

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Anjandev Roy 24 July 2019

Fine piece. Enjoyed it. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2018

It is too daring to fly High above the waves But I know I am braver Than I realized When I rolled and twirled And sucked by their power.....touching and impressive. Nice theme. Beautiful poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 10 May 2018

Courage is what we all need.+++10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 March 2018

This poem voluminously articulates what constitutes courage! A poem of great character! Pleasure reading it again!

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Alfouz San Antonio 19 March 2018

Great Encouraging poem

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Thank you, Aldouz. Your wonderful comment will encourage me to pen more.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2018

Where there is courage and confidence there is nothing impossible. A great message.

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Thank you, Akhtar for your great comment. Your visit is much appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2018

Revisiting your poem values more. You are very right. Courage allows mind to do impossible things possible. High above the waves with braveness a person can fly and he can reach up the fire like sun. Courage matters a lot. An interesting and excellent poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Thank you, Kumarmani for your great and generous comments. I feel honored of your revisit.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2018

Age, courage! ! Facing the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A nice comment, Edward. Thank you for the visit.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 March 2018

Rose Marie, such a sublime write...10+++

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A wonderful comment, Bernard. Thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

The depictions of the poem justify the title 'Courage'. In every step one must have courage to win the goal. I would like to quote...... It is too daring to fly High above the waves But I know I am braver Beautiful piem shared. Thanks.

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Kumarmani, such an inspiring comment. Thank you very much.

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Nudershada Cabanes 02 March 2018

A well executed write. A poem that captures the resilience and courage of the human spirit that can endure the sting and the strong force of nature.10

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An amazing comment, Nuder. Thank you for the visit.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

I am sorry for the typos... read it as. embrace...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

Let your courage embracing the heat, the scorching sun! A very insightful write Rose! Thanks for sharing...10

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A great comment, Dr. Dillip. Thank you very much.

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Unwritten Soul 02 March 2018

I like the inner strength that pulsating from core of this poem...its wonderful and i feel its burning my spirit!

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Your amazing comment is a gem to my pen, Unwritten Soul. Thank you for the visit.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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