It takes courage to reach
The fiery sun
And let its rays
Beat down on my soft skin
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It is too daring to fly/High above the waves/But I know I am braver/Than I realized...................powerful expression! An excellent poem!
It is too daring to fly High above the waves But I know I am braver Than I realized When I rolled and twirled And sucked by their power.....touching and impressive. Nice theme. Beautiful poem.
This poem voluminously articulates what constitutes courage! A poem of great character! Pleasure reading it again!
Thank you, Aldouz. Your wonderful comment will encourage me to pen more.
Where there is courage and confidence there is nothing impossible. A great message.
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Revisiting your poem values more. You are very right. Courage allows mind to do impossible things possible. High above the waves with braveness a person can fly and he can reach up the fire like sun. Courage matters a lot. An interesting and excellent poem is brilliantly penned...10
Thank you, Kumarmani for your great and generous comments. I feel honored of your revisit.
Age, courage! ! Facing the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The depictions of the poem justify the title 'Courage'. In every step one must have courage to win the goal. I would like to quote...... It is too daring to fly High above the waves But I know I am braver Beautiful piem shared. Thanks.
A well executed write. A poem that captures the resilience and courage of the human spirit that can endure the sting and the strong force of nature.10
Let your courage embracing the heat, the scorching sun! A very insightful write Rose! Thanks for sharing...10
I like the inner strength that pulsating from core of this poem...its wonderful and i feel its burning my spirit!
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Success comes to those who dare. Thus goes the saying. Dreams and realities. In between there moves life- daringly. Aspirations sky high could be many. But when attempts get wet we realize our limits. The sky isn't a limit, if we could find ourselves braver enough to meet the challenges in life. Beautiful poem- though short provides a lot to ponder over.