Being kissed by the artist, she shrieked:
"What's with you? " and the lady was piqued
"What can I say...
I got carried away..."
"You've had models before? "
"Yes... just three or four...
An onion, banana, a vase or two
And now, overwhelmingly... you."
by golly when you're right you're right thank you my good friend for your support
I am rather proud of the final product A little tougher than usual to produce
with these sorts od comments I shall press ever onward thank you for taking the time to comment
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Easy to get carried away in such a case... Why call it doggerel (such an ugly word!) when you could have labeled it couplet? It really is a series of couplets. In fact, why bother labeling the form at all? Listing the form is not required, you know. I seldom bother to fill it in, because laziness is my best quality.
you are quite correct I think it is a couplet and I shall re=label it. I like to let the limerick people know as it is my hope to popularize it more.