(couplet)the Impetuous Young Artist Poem by WES Vogler

(couplet)the Impetuous Young Artist

Rating: 5.0


Being kissed by the artist, she shrieked:
"What's with you? " and the lady was piqued
"What can I say...
I got carried away..."

"You've had models before? "
"Yes... just three or four...
An onion, banana, a vase or two
And now, overwhelmingly... you."

(couplet)the Impetuous Young Artist
Friday, October 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 11 October 2019

Easy to get carried away in such a case... Why call it doggerel (such an ugly word!) when you could have labeled it couplet? It really is a series of couplets. In fact, why bother labeling the form at all? Listing the form is not required, you know. I seldom bother to fill it in, because laziness is my best quality.

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wes vogler 11 October 2019

you are quite correct I think it is a couplet and I shall re=label it. I like to let the limerick people know as it is my hope to popularize it more.

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Kelly Kurt 11 October 2019

See; you are more than a Limericist.

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wes vogler 11 October 2019

by golly when you're right you're right thank you my good friend for your support

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Leeann Azzopardi 11 October 2019

Excellent Doggerel Bravo!

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wes vogler 11 October 2019

I am rather proud of the final product A little tougher than usual to produce

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 October 2019

A well penned fun doggerel, sir Wes...10++*

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wes vogler 11 October 2019

thank you I like this one myself

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wes vogler 11 October 2019

with these sorts od comments I shall press ever onward thank you for taking the time to comment

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WES Vogler

Vancouver BC Canada
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