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meaningful and thought provoking.. great play on the word 'mourning'.. nice piece whit. keep it up! -killy

Mournings light. I like that.

Short but very effective.

I love it! It's so short, but so signifgant. Beautiful poem! Keep writing!

very good and real voted10 surya

I read a poem a very long time ago. I don't know where it came from or who wrote it, but I will always remember it. Something like: The night has a thousand eyes and the day but one The light of a whole world dies When love is done... Or something kinda like that. I don't know why your poem reminded of it, but it did. DC