Saturday, February 20, 2010

Coupledom Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to revoke my state of independence
I want to go back to coupledom and live with you,
conjoined
in connubial bliss.
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Karen Touzalin
COMMENTS
Annabel Cruz 13 February 2011

love the honest simplicity of this one! There's also an understated humor which is very appealing and sweet.

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Matt Mooney 23 January 2011

How could one do better than this with a thought like that? It's the sweetest of poetry stating your case so honestly and beautifully.10.

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Amy Cullinane 15 June 2010

I like this, straight and simple.

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Karen Touzalin

Karen Touzalin

Kingston, Jamaica
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