Coup De Foudre Comments

I love your poetry because its unique its original---not someone elses' reflections. Yeah like Robert, I too will say I like those phrases 'the body scorches' and 'the sky was parted from the sea'. It reminded me of the biblical story of the Red Sea. great write A++and many 10sssssss it goes to my fav list love anjali

This is one of my favorites. I like the variable line lengths that seem to underscore the somewhat random nature of the persona's good fortune. Through it all the rhythms moves confidently. You have crafted some very strong images. 'the body scorches' and ''The sky was parted from the sea The stars no longer a reflection in a basin' strike me as very successful and powerful.

Glad your happy in a sad world